theabysmal's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

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Smooth

joshlul responds:

i use lotion with aloe

[|R|Journey To Titan]

This tune has some flavor.

While the synths are smooth and flowing, I feel that your drums don't have enough kick to fit the package. You should spend some time creating more basslines that can really pack a punch in your breaks.

I like the story behind the song :-)

Radiationator responds:

Thanks for the review, great tips! :)

[Feels Like Water (Original Mix]

Big sound on this one! I really dig those keys, they blend exceptionally well with the melody.
I like the bass skips to show you have dominance over the track.
The drop at 3:50 is charming, it sounds similar to daft punk but has a distinguished trance feeling to it.
I'm glad after 7 years you were able to reach the type of sound you were hearing in your head :-)
took me about the same time to realize my own potential as well.
This well deserves 5 stars from anyone! Great work!

Sequenced responds:

Thanks bro.

[Troubled Silence]

I dig this tune man. Those keys blend well with the synth. The drum break at 1:37 is pleasant and dynamic. I love how the melody compliments the bass, but what I really like about this track is the melancholy feeling to it. Right on.

larrynachos responds:

Thanks dude! I'm glad you like it!

[haha's and hehe's]

Couple of tips

This was good in my opinion, just a couple things that you could maybe fix if you think they are bad also. Its a little too fast, try to make the transitions more slower and spread it out including the synth, its goes kinda fast, try to slow it down a bit. other then that, the sound is crisp and you have some nice wavs. Good job and Good luck on Newgrounds. =D

EstanyChaos responds:

thank you! yea, I should've slowed it down a bit, I appreciate the tip.
thanks for listening in :D

[-(Cat's Pajamas)-]

WAAHH!

ALL my 5 R belong to This. Great beat =D

dittyboppoo responds:

lol thanks =D